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    那一次,我后悔了
    來源: 時間:2017/2/6 0:00:00 作者:

       一天,我一個人在家,感到很無聊,我決定要踢足球玩。我踢得正高興的時候,只聽“啪”的一聲,花瓶被踢碎了。我頓時愣住了,過了一會兒,才反應過來。我看著一個好端端的花瓶變成了一地的碎片,真讓人心疼。我不敢直視。花瓶中鮮艷的花朵也撒落一地。

        我心想:這下可完了,媽媽回來了就... ...,這時,眼淚已經在我的眼眶里打轉了。突然,我有了一個想法,我可以欺騙媽媽,但如果被媽媽發現了,那就是錯上加錯了。不行,我得做一個誠實的孩子,但是一旦媽媽看到那破碎的花瓶,她就會訓我的。這讓我很糾結,似有惡魔和天使在左右著我的想法,這讓我無法選擇。只聽樓下傳來“蹬蹬”的腳步聲,我知道是媽媽回來了,我現在就像一只熱鍋上的螞蟻,急得直跺腳。

        最后,我選擇瞞騙過去,擦干眼淚,我趕緊把地上的碎片清理干凈。做好這一切后聽見開門聲,媽媽進門給我說:“兒子,今天我給你做你最愛吃的可樂雞翅。”我沒有回答媽媽,走進我的房間,豆大的淚珠已經落了下來,我欺騙了媽媽,媽媽還給我做我最愛吃的可樂雞翅。這時我的心就像針刺一樣疼。

        過了幾天,我一想起那件事,就感到真后悔。

        評語:在作文中能加入心理描寫和動作描寫,不錯!你寫了在打碎花瓶后,你的心理波動,流露出了真情實感。需要注意的是一些細節上再細心一點。

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